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Aug 22, 2014 | 2:16 PM EDT

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I am still very new to the flash programs so please forgive my not so clean look. This is a game about a small boy that is stranded in a dream world over run by nightmares.

we have a few good people helping with this project though are always willing to welcome help. if interested please let me know

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Delgado989Delgado989

Rated 5 / 5 stars

I really like this idea. I'm excited to see what this grows into. : )
Wish I could help contribute in anyway, but I'm still a student studying game design. haha


TrojanMan87 responds:

im still a student as well. got a few good people helping me out though we can always use more help


beowolf666beowolf666

Rated 4 / 5 stars

This is awesome, your style is pretty cool. The only artwork that needs improvement is the castle and sidewalk in the end. I would love to help but im just a writer, a good one, but just a writer. if you need one of those let me know.


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TrojanMan87 responds:

thank you for the offer. as busy as I have been could use the help. send me a message and ill send you to our fourm if interested in seeing where we are


BlackKitsune42BlackKitsune42

Rated 3 / 5 stars

This is a good trailer albeit an eerie one.


TrojanMan87 responds:

thank you. :)


twobyfourtwobyfour

Rated 2 / 5 stars

i see what you're going for... i love the illustration style, and i know it must be hard to keep it when switching to animated scenes. the animations are too fast. i'm sure there could be a way to have some elements move with the same style as the still images. the soundtrack is really fitting too, i like it! keep it up


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TrojanMan87 responds:

thank you I am still trying to learn the flash program and know very little about animating as is but im trying :) you can expect far better improvements in the future though for now just trying to learn


SotheTheSlothSotheTheSloth

Rated 4 / 5 stars

You know, I see some great potential in this.
The murkiness of the scenes add to the theme of a dark tale. And the drawing themselves make it look like this is a child trying to tell the story themselves. I don't know if this was intended or an accident but you have something running in the right direction here.

This is a nice choice for music too (is it an original score or taken? Make sure to give credit!) Very fitting set of intensity.
As for a critique, be careful of the transitions and the shrinking/enlarging of the still shots. They do come off as a little choppy. I understand you're new to flash. So you can make this one point to research and work on!

All in all, you've got something that can be great in the future. I look forward to your future projects!


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TrojanMan87 responds:

thank you. the music i had mixed with a program music maker jam trying to give a decent feel we are currently still working on this project for the most part just wanted to say the project isnt dead yet.
i see what you mean about the transitions being choppy i will try to work on that. thank you for the review and critique. it really helps me to improve.