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made this animatic really quickly and uploaded it to my youtube channel i decided newgrounds would be a good place to get some feedback so comment anything sya what i should do and thank you
The right idea.
But it's ass. Not even close to finished. Hardly any actual animating apart from the bounce trick. GGA started as simple, stylised slideshows, but it's come to a point where people actually do some animating or, at least, colour. This won't get you anywhere.
thank you for the comment and the rating i will try my best to do better next time =)
Animations were pretty funny but it could use some color and a few more creative ideas to go with it. It could also probably use a custom outro or intro to go with it. Overall it was humorousand pretty good.
thank you this is the best comment i have had so far and i will try and do better next time
Boring, pointless loop. Generic garbage that's based on other people's ideas.
ok so what do you suggest i do to fix this
Ok saying "made in an hour" does not help you score any sympathy stars, put time, love, and pride into every project you do because you'll never know what you will be known for.
thank you but i didnt want "sympathy stars" i was giving basic info on the animation thats all but thank you for giving me your feedback =)
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