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This was originally supposed to be a game but I decided to make it a quick animation this took me quite a long time to do.
good game, good idea, good message.
this movie was pretty cool, and i could see this done as a game, it could be cool.
its shame that it never became a game, it could be fun to play....
anyway, this was a movie with nice design on characters, a good story, and a good message.
i would like to see more from you sir.
i support the no bullying thing, was never bullied myself but i have heard that it can be pretty bad, but with that being said this flash wasnt very good lol, no offence
good message but the animation is not so good i imagine animation can take a long time i mean i did a short one not so good but you have to throw your life into something i think hey i wish this web site had (insert thing) but then i would be like that would be hard work and then im like if you work hard even for a small thing it can be great (inspirational music play)
Although this video tries to send a good message, the way it is done is quite ineffective. Fighting fire with fire (Beating up the bully) is just not a good idea. Also the occasional jittery pictures or words were harsh on the eyes.
“Beware that, when fighting monsters, you yourself do not become a monster... for when you gaze long into the abyss. The abyss gazes also into you.” - Friedrich Nietzsche
Well, you did a great job animating so I can´t really complain about anything, lol.
But I would still recommend to maybe try and draw more straight and smooth lines?
Try 50 in smooth maybe?
And I don´t wish to hate, which is why I am telling you this advice, because you actually got talent in animation, that is for sure and I have indeed seen your other drawings.
If you have or want a drawing tablet) then I recommend you a Wacom Intuos, it is worth the money believe me and hey, try to watch DrawWithJazza on youtube, he teaches really good and then I am sure youwill turn even more better and amazing! Sorry if this sounds rude or anything -who knows- but yeah, I can see something in you so I wish to give advices/help :)
1.Thanks for the advice I appreciate it and the positive feedback.
2. I agree i should draw with more smooth lines and I'm trying to find which percentage of smoothing I'd like to use.
3.I agree I should get a Wacom Intous but until I get one I'm using a Monoprice 9 tablet, its not the best but it gets the job done for now.
Anyways, again, thanks for the constructive criticism :)
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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