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Beat The Bully

August 2, 2014 –
April 23, 2020
This entry was deleted.

Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.

Author Comments

This was originally supposed to be a game but I decided to make it a quick animation this took me quite a long time to do.

Reviews

good game, good idea, good message.
this movie was pretty cool, and i could see this done as a game, it could be cool.
its shame that it never became a game, it could be fun to play....

anyway, this was a movie with nice design on characters, a good story, and a good message.
i would like to see more from you sir.

i support the no bullying thing, was never bullied myself but i have heard that it can be pretty bad, but with that being said this flash wasnt very good lol, no offence

good message but the animation is not so good i imagine animation can take a long time i mean i did a short one not so good but you have to throw your life into something i think hey i wish this web site had (insert thing) but then i would be like that would be hard work and then im like if you work hard even for a small thing it can be great (inspirational music play)

Although this video tries to send a good message, the way it is done is quite ineffective. Fighting fire with fire (Beating up the bully) is just not a good idea. Also the occasional jittery pictures or words were harsh on the eyes.
“Beware that, when fighting monsters, you yourself do not become a monster... for when you gaze long into the abyss. The abyss gazes also into you.” - Friedrich Nietzsche

Well, you did a great job animating so I can´t really complain about anything, lol.
But I would still recommend to maybe try and draw more straight and smooth lines?
Try 50 in smooth maybe?
And I don´t wish to hate, which is why I am telling you this advice, because you actually got talent in animation, that is for sure and I have indeed seen your other drawings.
If you have or want a drawing tablet) then I recommend you a Wacom Intuos, it is worth the money believe me and hey, try to watch DrawWithJazza on youtube, he teaches really good and then I am sure youwill turn even more better and amazing! Sorry if this sounds rude or anything -who knows- but yeah, I can see something in you so I wish to give advices/help :)

<deleted> responds:

1.Thanks for the advice I appreciate it and the positive feedback.

2. I agree i should draw with more smooth lines and I'm trying to find which percentage of smoothing I'd like to use.

3.I agree I should get a Wacom Intous but until I get one I'm using a Monoprice 9 tablet, its not the best but it gets the job done for now.

Anyways, again, thanks for the constructive criticism :)

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2.80 / 5.00