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The abrupt and sporadic changes between shots make the animation a little hard to follow (I understand that this is ASDF-esque style, but I gues it just doesn't sit well with me). Otherwise, the short was good! The point of view from the camera was nice! I thought that showing the story of the baseball game that they were narrating (instead of themslves talking) was pretty funny! Keep making these. But try for a longer clip next time, this one was over too soon!
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I definitely agree with you on how fast paced the shot changes can be, my computer can be slow though so the timing doesn't even show up properly in the playback!
Thank you for the review though, I'll keep these things in mind next time.
that was good
I especially like the part where you use the video camera, as you put a sense of substance to it in which it actually looks like a video camera begin used.
Most of the Game grumps videos are just still images of things happening, but you actually put us in to the vision of what you think the two main characters are thinking about.
Good on ya.
Simple but elegant cartoon style mixed with good animation and a sense of timing on the scenes really puts you in the imagination of Dan an Arin. Good work.
Oh you flatter me using words like elegant :D
Thank you for the kind thoughts! I have been trying to get better at animating the scene instead of the talking, so I'm glad to hear it improves the quality!
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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