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rated 1.94 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Comedy - Original
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commercials
bodybuilders
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jbombcom

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Uploaded
Jul 26, 2014 | 9:21 PM EDT

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Author Comments

this is like some of those infomertial LOL

Reviews


RonadRonad

Rated 2 / 5 stars

There is a lot I want to comment about, firstly, the idea is definately not well thought of. Something more complex would be nicer.

Next you have already have main idea of drawing, just that I know your using a computer mouse to draw. It feels kind of akward drawing like that. Try find a digital drawing tablet, it simulates pen movements smoothly.

Lastly, try to voice act in a more quieter area, I can hear voices in the background.

I think you have potential though, a lot of potential actually.
Hope you luck in the future.


JBOMBCOM responds:

that was a older animation so i used the mouse but i already have a tablet. right now though im using the family computer and i will get a laptop soon thx for giving me some tips


BlackKitsune42BlackKitsune42

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

This just was not funny. Also the voice seems a bit unfitting for the character. Good try though.



TheComputerHermitTheComputerHermit

Rated 0 / 5 stars

Sorry, but other than the half decent art, this video was not very good at all <_<. You sound like youre younger, so youve got plenty of time to improve. Keep on practicing!



TypanionTypanion

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Needs work on vocal volume other than that good job animating.



beowolf666beowolf666

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

that was ok I guess. first off to the kid recording audio, next time do it WITHOUT people talking in the background. if this is your first flash then not bad, but if this isn't... smh


JBOMBCOM responds:

im working on getting a laptop so i can record stuff in my room without the tv on and the chatter in the backround thx