The animation in question is one of the worst I have seen to date. Being a submission in the movie category, it should be noted that there are options that take you to one of four animations of terrible quality. The audio quality is far below average, the use of artwork from artists is not cited and the contrast of colours and image quality used in the animation is painful to watch.
It would appear that animation is not a field that you are suited to (made apparent by this eyesore) so my main piece of advice for the creator's of this content would be to give up because any amount of improvement on this piece wouldn't yield anything worthy of a one star rating.
tl;dr Blam this piece of crap.