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detective phil

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rated 2.11 / 5 stars
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Comedy - Original
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Uploaded
Jul 14, 2014 | 9:34 PM EDT

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a funny animation that uses some popular charcters i am not the best at this so please tell me what i could do better and thank you for watching this animation

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BlackKitsune42BlackKitsune42

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

To be honest, the audio quality wasn't that good and the video was just not that funny. Also the ad in the middle proved a bit too distracting. Good try but this would have been better if you have hidden the real thief until the end. You can't do a mystery if you know who did it from the beginning.


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JBOMBCOM responds:

What audio do u think i should use im useing audacity now and i dont have very high tech equipment with thank u for leaving a helpful comment


koswhippasnappakoswhippasnappa

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

well for one. the plot really doesn't make any sense but also the toons you choice really had no reason to be in the same film but don't give up, you gave a solid effort. what I think you ay wanna do is read some books, if you don't wanna read have some audio books(that always works for me) listen to some other writters/ movie stories and find what you wanna make come to life. always try to find something that makes you dream and explore on it. don't give up litle one, your flame is far from being put out.


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JBOMBCOM responds:

thx for the advice i wont stop trying