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Jul 9, 2014 | 1:16 PM EDT

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this is a short dramatic flash about... well... i'll just have to let you watch it to find out.

i put the idea into a short screenplay a few months ago and progressively finished this bit by bit. its finally done, and i hope you take something from it.

for all you post-viewers who are scratching your heads, read this. the man is in purgatory. he's just a consciousness left to float in absentia for all eternity, and he's slowly losing his memory of senses.

nobody has to end up like this. i hope this gives you some insight and maybe some personal hope for what you can accomplish and do.

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dellyyo5000dellyyo5000

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars 9 days ago

That was deep but one question: How can you regret dying if you are already dead?


horsenwelles responds:

having a consciousness that floats aimlessly into the void unheard and unsung can decide what it feels.


SlyhermitSlyhermit

Rated 4 / 5 stars 9 days ago

The voice acting was good but the audio quality was kind of rough. Art is pretty rough too, but despite that, the writing, symbolism and concept were outstanding. It almost makes up for the flaws I mentioned, but not quite so I had to take away a star. Keep it up and you'll only get better. Looking foward to seeing more. You earned a follower :)


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horsenwelles responds:

thank you for the wonderful review


Accused-PheonixAccused-Pheonix

Rated 4 / 5 stars 2 weeks ago

This was incredibly well written, nice concept of being trapped inside ones own head after death, the overall style worked really well to visualize the instability of his mind (even if it wasn't intentional).

Very solid 4/5! Would like to see this get featured.
Great work. :)


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horsenwelles responds:

thats a review i like to see! thank you so much for giving me your input, and i hope i can do some more dramatic flashes in the future


MistyEntertainmentMistyEntertainment

Rated 5 / 5 stars 2 weeks ago

This is the best thing I have ever seen.


horsenwelles responds:

whoah! thank you so much =D


MiaMia

Rated 5 / 5 stars 2 weeks ago

Sonic wasn't in it. 0/10


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horsenwelles responds:

best review. sorry about sonic not pressing a