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Jul 4, 2014 | 8:47 AM EDT

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Gonna need the feedback for this , i know its nothing special but its gonna be nice to find out what am i doing wrong :)
youtube link just in case - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qroLYK4OOjI&feature=youtu.be

Reviews


OddKazzOddKazz

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars July 4, 2014

It definitely would have been better if it was longer. Not bad animation, super cartoony. Is there a reason why his voice was text-to-speech?
It was funny, but definitely could have had more to it. Keep going though!



SplaaatySplaaaty

Rated 1 / 5 stars July 4, 2014

Things I liked:
-The joke
-The art style

Things that need work:
-Good joke, but you need MORE of it
-Text to speech is painful to listen to, so either voice it yourelf or get a friend or two to help with voices
-I heard that audiojam clip from the intro music!

A good attempt, keep practising.



RealLamandSamRealLamandSam

Rated 2 / 5 stars July 4, 2014

It was alright but improve your drawing and lip syncing alittle bit more and also don't use spongia it just sounds really weird and unnatural.



DragonBallDavidDragonBallDavid

Rated 5 / 5 stars July 4, 2014

Fantastic, I loved it! Great Job!



NGPulpNGPulp

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars July 4, 2014

It would've been the best if you weren't using Microsoft Sam as a voice actor.


siizar responds:

yea i know that , but english is not my first language and i am not feeling confrotable enough to record myself , next time maybe