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Gonna need the feedback for this , i know its nothing special but its gonna be nice to find out what am i doing wrong :)
youtube link just in case - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qroLYK4OOjI&feature=youtu.be
It definitely would have been better if it was longer. Not bad animation, super cartoony. Is there a reason why his voice was text-to-speech?
It was funny, but definitely could have had more to it. Keep going though!
Things I liked:
-The art style
Things that need work:
-Good joke, but you need MORE of it
-Text to speech is painful to listen to, so either voice it yourelf or get a friend or two to help with voices
-I heard that audiojam clip from the intro music!
A good attempt, keep practising.
It was alright but improve your drawing and lip syncing alittle bit more and also don't use spongia it just sounds really weird and unnatural.
Fantastic, I loved it! Great Job!
It would've been the best if you weren't using Microsoft Sam as a voice actor.
yea i know that , but english is not my first language and i am not feeling confrotable enough to record myself , next time maybe
A short film about a park bench
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