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Jun 28, 2014 | 4:49 PM EDT

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First cartoon to post in NG!!!
I made this one of my first animation with Adobe Flash.
I'm only going to get better.



Rated 0 / 5 stars

I don't have idea what I've just seen.


Rated 2 / 5 stars

As a first cartoon, this is good. As something good to watch, this needs more content/action.


Rated 1 / 5 stars

I recognize and understand the motive behind this submission as it is your first attempt at flash and that is something to be proud of. However, it is imperative to have a focal point in your submissions to make them appealing to viewers.

As far as quality goes I won't put down the art work because I've seen countless submissions come through the portal bearing worse graphics and still turned out to be masterpieces. Now that you have the hang of flash and using the submission system on NG lets utilize those skills by creating a piece worthy of the hall of fame!

I wish you luck in your future endeavors.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Well I would of liked it more if it was longer. The intro was just too long.


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Good demo for practicing... but needs more to be a submission.