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Jun 23, 2014 | 10:30 PM EDT

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A collaboration animation

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Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

Horrible animation
voice didn't fit the man
to much rhyming
need more comedy
needs more color
change the cartoony effect

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Rated 3 / 5 stars

The drawing is good, but it needs to be improved. I liked the camera angles and the voice acting, but I don't understand why the camera is always shaking. Next time fix the shaky camera and make the voice acting louder, you have potential!


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Please stop with the shaky cam. The drawing is otherwise good and expressive, and I like your use of other effects, such as the fire, but don't make them a crutch, especially an annoying one.

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