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Beyond The Teeth

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Jun 23, 2014 | 5:32 PM EDT

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Experience a lengthy pan up a towering collage i spent a couple of months making to visualize a track from my album.
Something like the Bayeux tapestry but vertical, and cubist.

Many thanks to MDeBonis for his wonderful voice work!

The video illustrates the penultimate track in my album "And A Few People Laugh", you can hear the other tracks here:

This was a complicated project and I learned a lot making it. Please let me know what you think!



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

First off, that's a BIG collage. I've never seen anything like this, really. The voiceover follows the collage in an interesting way. I really like the tension in the voice around 1:03. Some criticism: I think perhaps it goes on a bit long before the voiceover starts. The jerky framerate at the beginning gives a bit of a cheap flavor to an otherwise amazing project. Since the part with the low framerate at the beginning is the first thing the viewer sees, it might have people clicking off of it before it really gets going. I might more slowly taper off the ambient sound at the beginning so that it's barely audible by the time the voiceover starts. As is, there's a clumsy feel to the transition between the noise and the voiceover's start. All in all, I did really like the originality of this and the script was wonderful!


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

I love the visual style & Narration of your video. In an era were everything is done by computers, i enjoyed the fact that you took the time to do a collage with all the layers involve! the rhytme of the montage was a little too slow for my taste that is the only reason why i took half a star. NICE JOB!