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Jun 18, 2014 | 11:52 PM EDT

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A bit more on the darker side than my last video. This could be good or bad. I avoided making any sounds until I have the opportunity to buy a new microphone to record with. Like before, I welcome critiques and advice ^_^

Also would like to thank the people of the last video with their helpful advice and I hope this makes up the shortcomings of the last video.

I noticed I uploaded the wrong video. I am currently trying to replace the video with the final video with the credits to the sponsors. I apologize

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SLEEPYDRAGUNSLEEPYDRAGUN

Rated 3 / 5 stars

This has potential. I liked how clear her facial expressions are, it makes it easier to understand what's going on. I didn't mind the lack of detail too much, it has a unique appeal. Fix the color scheme a little, try adding a wider range of colors. Some of the colors make it hard to distinguish certain objects. Also, work a bit more with the movement of the characters to make it look fluid, some of it looked kinda choppy, or went by too fast.

Other than that, I liked it. The music was well suited to the story. Some environmental ambiance would work wonders with this, too. (the sound of the train)

Thumbs up from me!


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ZeroELopez responds:

Thank you! I will be practicing more 3D animation so it could be more natural and fluid.


BlackKitsune42BlackKitsune42

Rated 3 / 5 stars

This was a good video with a sad ending. Only question, why was the girl the only character with a face? It wasn't a major problem but I was just curious why. Nevertheless, good job.


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ZeroELopez responds:

I wanted to show that anyone can be in the situation of the male character. My original idea was to hide his face with a dark shadow. I made one character to watch him in the point of view of a stranger.

I also wanted a character to react to the life of the male character. As for why it is a woman, I love drawing women ^_^

Hopefully that answers your question and thank you for watching :)