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Jun 14, 2014 | 7:19 PM EDT

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**one more thing** I love criticism, good and bad, it improves me and my work immensely.....however, I take bad criticism very respectfully from OTHER animators and artists of NG. due to the fact that they know what they're talking about. so for the people who THINK they know what they're saying to improve my work without the experience to prove their statement, im just gonna assume that you're just a kid who doesn't like the vid because of the lack of their personal taste of entertainment and comedy.

**note** I just realized some of you critics have alot of brony/furry porn going on in their profiles.....that's fucking weird. lol

**Update** Im having idiots complaining about the "story". there's no story in this vid. just an animation UPGRADE from the last video, which havent really explained a story either.....

**Important**

Ok, ladies and gentlemen. My laptop is dying, my graphics card has gone to shit and I can no longer make animation videos for a while. So you'll see some graphic errors here and there.

I Guess you can say this was supposed to be an upgrade to last video.....but since my laptop is being gay, i can't help that its not to up to par

ALSO, im not like a sound engineer or whatever, idk how to mix sound effects well, so forgive my skills with sony vegas, im also still new to this animation stuff.

If you complain about my video, i will direct your simple-minded ass back to the description.

Thank you for reading.

Reviews


ebflover777ebflover777

Rated 5 / 5 stars 5 days ago

COOLEST. ANIMATION. EVER. You have my friend's fan-made Cirbi, riding the Dragoon!!! Also, Luigi death stare, perfect. The only faults are, that at the end, Dr. Octaconapus should have shot a laser, and either a club playing Nya Nya, or Ridin' dirty playing when Luigi gave 'the stare' that originated from Fluttershy.



ADHWEEEADHWEEE

Rated 5 / 5 stars June 21, 2014

Fairly awesome. Couple minor faults with the animation, didn't like how the car moved, it seemed kinda off and same as everyone else has said the music was kinda loud. My only other complaint would have to be this, why didn't weegie take the shot? He clearly had a perfect shot at kirby and he didn't take it, why? Good job and keep it up.


FleetAdmiralTony responds:

he was teasing kirby ;). but yea i see what you mean with the car movement, i gotta work on that type of stuff. lol thank you very much!


Draco85Draco85

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars June 15, 2014

The looks were nice but... few things were quite bothering....
First, the first 35 seconds or so are... what exactly? I didn't see who / what it was before that time...
but alright... building up tension or whatnot ... whatever...
Secondly, the physics were ... well comming from a fairytale or something because cars don't fly up from hitting a high curve like that but ok, can imagine it beeing a cartoon.... But then.. for some reason instead of flying over the warehouse that it supposed to go by the looks of it... it falls to the left side? Not even pro-baseball players can trow that kind of curveball, let alone a car...

As for the rest, the music was kinda loud but tuned down it's a good choice for the animation and the overall grapics are nice. Story / interaction was ... ok, but i'm kinda disappointed of what a few more tweaks could have done to improve the overall flash.
( Hope you get your laptop working and hopefully see a improvement on your next episode )


FleetAdmiralTony responds:

what the fuck are you talking about in that first paragraph? lol

also you and this chick below this comment are using an immense amount of dots between sentences lol


TheGhostOfMarzTheGhostOfMarz

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars June 15, 2014

it was okay...but the animation was....weak...the story telling poses were fine but everything felt like it had the same light physics...nothing seemed to have any discernible weight...and not being a sound engineer has nothing to do with mixing sounds well...all of the sounds worked out...but all you have to do is know what to make quieter and what to make louder...since this is animation its all about the animation and the story...everything else can be a bit below par as long as you get the story across...and you did...but...not as good as you could have...for example when the care flips...it did not feel very strong or intense...


FleetAdmiralTony responds:

story? lol i didnt really intended to make one. but thanks...


datcrazyblackboydatcrazyblackboy

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars June 15, 2014

I liked it, eventhough the sound was kinda off and the graphics werent up to par thats cool, atleast you got one last good animation before your laptop was about to go to laptop heaven :)


FleetAdmiralTony responds:

i did the best i could..... but i need more practice with sony vegas lol