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Sorry for the video quality ^_^;;
This was a collaboration with Heli n' Roo on youtube, I didn't upload it up to Newgrounds really quick because I'm what you say, very timid and I just feel like I could've done better ^_^;;
I admit I'm not a fan of hip hop but this was a fun project to do, something that takes me out of my comfort zones, I would like to thank Heli N' Roo for this opportunity.
Check them out on their Youtube channel here - https://www.youtube.com/user/HeliNRooProductions
And can I just say please be gentle with me 0_o, no need to get all pissy and abusive, I want helpful criticism no trolling >_<
fine art and concept of movie is good but needs some improvement in animation :D
good for me good music :)
it wasn't bad :p although that being said, I dunno if I could criticize the animation or the song...
Overall the quality was average. the video quality was okay - but the animation in terms of fluidity was pretty simple which isn't so bad. at least it was a good attempt!
the use of angles was interesting. don't forget 3/4 stances, looking from the bottom up, the top down, and making use of panning/tweening the entire scene of what it is. it would of been interesting to see an actual environment too; maybe a club, with some visual effects like fog and the sorts.
the song was a little plain for my taste, but I suppose it was fitting to the video? :p
overall, it was ok. but it needs a little more "umph" to really make a more interesting impact!
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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