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3rd animation and first animation longer than a minute. =P
Ronald Caliber tries to make the most out of each day in his boring life, until one day when he comes across a family heirloom which gives him power beyond all expectations.
Catch the series on Youtube, it gets uploaded there first; https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC-gH1C7hPDAFkkAXxL5SNkw
Looks like the start of a really interesting series, it was nice to see the interaction between Ronald and Solid and the episode ended on a good cliffhanger.
However, the intro was a little long, and the lack of animation in areas made the still-frames quite noticeable. Giving exposition to a new series is important, but by the 4 minute mark, I was hoping for some more variety.
I'll subscribe on Youtube and keep an eye out for future episodes ^_^ looking forward to seeing how the series develops.
Thank you so much for your feedback. =D Yeah I even at one point thought I should cut out the intro...but your one of the first people who's said it's too long. XD Well it could be longer, I could've made it a minute or a minute and a half long...still I keep the intro on for future episodes in-case anyone is watching random videos and stumbles upon it...I mean you have to admit the intro song is a little bit catchy. >3>
Your animation can definitely use some work but the Calibre guy is very decently voiced and I love Solid's personality! Keep at it! Look forward to seeing some improvement.
Thanks, as I said in the author comments I'm still a beginner so thank you so much for your wonderful feedback. =D
There is a lot of potential behind this project, definitely. The opening theme is very much catchy and gets the crowd rowling. The story is also mildly intriguing in terms of structure, and the music choices are decent. However, the art style, dialogue, and delivery are very shotty. The characters are ok, but can really be grating and irritating, and at times it really does feel like I'm watching the dub to a bad anime. It's ok for a small, first-time long-term project, but I would work on quality instead of quantity. I understand that you're trying to make a series out of this, with episodes as long as 11-12 minutes, but it feels rather rushed, and people are going to lose you after your long introduction.
It probably looks rushed because I'm still a beginner. ^_^() And yes, unfortunately I myself voice a few characters in the first episode and I'm not that good a vocie actor, however from the secon episode onwards all major characters will be voices by great VAs. =D Thanks for you awesome feedback sir, it means a lot when you say it has a lot of potential. =D
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
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