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Grab yourself some fish champagne and join Naffa at the bar on the first episode of Kapish!
Watched it twice and loved it! Cool characters and great atmosphere! The voice of Stock was hilarious.
Good job, can't wait to see another one.
First things first, it seems like a good attempt. You aren't really duplicating any styles here, they look kinda whacky but cartoony. Many things are properly textured, and it has decent atmosphere all around. However, with that being said it lacks shadows and shading. While it's all textured, it definitely looks good but needs just an extra smidgen of graphic work.
The way they speak is kind of funny, reminds me of Simlish. But if they speak like that, and part of the animation isn't dedicated to the exchange and the action - keep the dialogue conversation short or just use regular english. You had it in the outro, it would make sense to use it fully or just vice versa. You should use text should you have the 'Simlish' thing going.
There's no pre-story - just a guy going to a girl at the bar. You introduce these characters but there's no emphasis on the purpose of the other characters. This makes it moot and makes a character introduction weak.
Don't get beat up on it - I dig the intro, and the logo is pretty hip - the outro is also the only other weak part of the animation. Overall, not bad, however the fancy graphics, nice intro/logo, and interesting design do not make up for lack of sharp punch line, lack of interesting dialogue, and the shortness of the animation. I'd still check out the episode 2 if I see it.
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