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Created in College.
I am 16 years old and this is my first attempt of a flash game.
Any feedback is read through :)
Don't get discouraged from my low rating, and the following negative points that gave said rating:
- Space background is missing. Currently, it's only grey. Replace it with a static image OR add two to three extra layers ontop of a space image, so they are able to pan left/right/up/down so it looks like there's an effect of depth/dimension to your playground
- Sounds. Music/SFX. There are none here. I'm sure you could reach out to fellow NG audio fools. Heck, even we could assist you in this department, for free.
- Mission parameters. I'm told I need to collect coins to repair my ship (which already works just fine, maybe you should suggest the ship needs to be fully upgraded as it's only a basic setup and needs bigger thrusters to get back to earth). Anyway, I've collected all the coins until the timer runs out and I get "Game Over" with no way to continue forward, upgrade my ship, go to a shop, or anything. I'm stuck in grey limbo.
- Coin placement. The coins seem to only spawn near the bottom of the screen, primarily favouring the left hand side for the better part of the game.
Other than these complaints, the controls could be tighter, but not a severity. They're mostly quite responsive - what I think could benefit them, would be some physics. Even though it's space, some gravity could be applied, just to give it a bit of challenge.
Well for starters; there's no sound, no story, no instructions on how to control the spaceship, the graphics are almost non-existent and the movement of the ship is weird, instead of moving in a line like expected it just rotates like hell confusing the player for a few seconds until he gets used to the controls.
Very bad ship movement, terrible controls, animation and 2D model. No sounds or music.
You should try to add more things before posting it here, but it was good for your first try.
ps: The game doesn`t restart
There's not really a lot going on. The controls are goofy and there's nothing to make you want to continue playing. But as a first attempt, it's a functioning game so good on you.
Okay, it's your first attempt and it seems pretty good. The graphic isn't much but you could work on that. The floating of the spaceship feels realistic and the flying is hard to manage, but real fun.
It would be nice to see your score in the end or get back to the START button.
But on the whole, really nice :)
A N64 styled Collect-a-thon 3d Platformer!
Swap between the worlds and help two little friends to reach the same goal!
God did it in 6 days. How much time will you need?
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