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Hey there guys,
This is my first ever submission to Newgrounds, and my first ever proper animated short, hope you all enjoy it somewhat!
It's always just as awesome stumbling upon these occasional first submissions that seem to outclass previous artists generative work entirely. Looks well-worked, really smooth and figurative animation, with an atmosphere that's built up by more than just a breeze. Not sure what the message is here - if there is one - but it gets me in an inspired/moody mood. The music fits it well. Nice work!
Beautiful. Love the backgrounds, can tell a lot of emotion went into this peace. Conveys a message without being too obvious. Animation nice and smooth. Look forward to seeing more from you.
Very thoughtful short,
Beautiful backgrounds, and colour palette, the animation was very slick too.
Some parts let it down, mainly the narrative, would have been good to have made it a little clearer, I can see you went for a more metaphorical thing here, but would have been nice to have a bit more direction.
Some of the animation could use some cleaning up, but for a first submission, pretty damn good!
Can't wait to see more from you.
eh! could been worst.
enjoyed it, make more :)
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