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May 7, 2014 | 7:56 PM EDT

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This is a short film to be continued.



Rated 3 / 5 stars

I found this partiular animation refreshing from your previous animations. Over all not bad and i kind of like it.

Sincerely, updown343

flashmakeit responds:

Thank you for the review> I am glad you look at it.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

You're getting better and better!
Keep it up!

Peace and love,
Lone X

flashmakeit responds:

Thank you you are one of my favorite musician and I wish you the best.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

lol.! so many question in my head goes unanswered. maybe ur other parts will clear them up.

I got a chuckle out of this mostly because how fast things esculated, and the fact alot of my question goes unanswerd. for me, your drawings were okay, but the animation and voice work needs some work. I have a tip for voice work. Talk how you would normally first then try adding a gimmick to a accent or even your own thing.

Welp, keep it up flash


flashmakeit responds:

well thanks for the review and tips. I guess it was a little unclear. She hear someone enter and got scared so she beat them up. A man told her she just beat up a federal agent. So she explained that he had no badge as she walk to her apartment. The two men blow her apartment up for her actions. Just a cartoon for entertainment. I will try and make my next cartoon clearer.


Rated 1 / 5 stars

1 FOR EFFORT... ._.

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Rated 5 / 5 stars

very different type of movie toon, today. thanks

flashmakeit responds:

I am so happy you enjoyed it and it was different.