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Schedules are good but in portion..if that makes sense...not too much structure but something to keep you driven. works for me anyway. im actually new too working on a intro vid as well XD
Anyway, Welcome to Newgrounds!
Thanks for the comment! I'll go ahead and favorite you so I can see it when you put it out!
You should work on the timing/spacing of the animation to make the movements less rigid. If I were you I also wouldn't bother shading the character for now and just focus on the making the animation fluid.
Some of the drawings are blocky/awkward. You should probably use the paintbrush instead of line tools, you can still make the lines look clean and its a lot easier to use.
Grey background and grey shirt is a bit too dull.
Also you should make transparent buttons over the stuff where annotation buttons would be.
See lots of potential, keep it up!
Thanks for the comment and the criticism, it's very much needed. I'll try to use the brush tool more, I like the way it looks more than the line tool anyway. Hopefully when my next few videos come out, you'll give me more insight!
Welcome to the community, I have no idea who you are but ill add you to my favorites. *gives thumbs up*
Thanks! I greatly appreciate the favorite!
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