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Apr 22, 2014 | 5:04 PM EDT

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My Newgrounds channel:
jerber7.newgrounds.com

My YouTube channel:
youtube.com/jerber7

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facebook.com/jerbershow

Reviews


PopsvschewyPopsvschewy

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Schedules are good but in portion..if that makes sense...not too much structure but something to keep you driven. works for me anyway. im actually new too working on a intro vid as well XD
Anyway, Welcome to Newgrounds!


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JerBer7 responds:

Thanks for the comment! I'll go ahead and favorite you so I can see it when you put it out!


SnubbySnubby

Rated 3 / 5 stars

You should work on the timing/spacing of the animation to make the movements less rigid. If I were you I also wouldn't bother shading the character for now and just focus on the making the animation fluid.

Some of the drawings are blocky/awkward. You should probably use the paintbrush instead of line tools, you can still make the lines look clean and its a lot easier to use.

Grey background and grey shirt is a bit too dull.

Also you should make transparent buttons over the stuff where annotation buttons would be.

See lots of potential, keep it up!


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JerBer7 responds:

Thanks for the comment and the criticism, it's very much needed. I'll try to use the brush tool more, I like the way it looks more than the line tool anyway. Hopefully when my next few videos come out, you'll give me more insight!


StandardXStandardX

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Welcome to the community, I have no idea who you are but ill add you to my favorites. *gives thumbs up*


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JerBer7 responds:

Thanks! I greatly appreciate the favorite!