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The Gang Investigate a Truck that has Crashed Outside their House, and Gain Super Powers. Woo Hoo!
Sorry, I have to say your animation and plot is not exactly the best. It does have a Edd-esque feel to me and you probably have put a lot of effort into it.
I can't believe I finished watching this though.
Very comic booky, and I love comics, so I did enjoy it. But the pacing between a comic and a cartoon should be a little different. Like, when you explain all their powers, it's got a lot of funny, but it really slows down the video's pace. Powers can be shown really well through video so they don't need the same explanations as comics might. Tighten up some of the dead space, i.e. gasps for air or pauses between dialogue, cut down jokes that don't move the plot along or at least involve characters people may be invested in, and everything else was great. I laugh at some bits and like others watched the whole thing.
Also the sound.
I only give a long review here because we have common goals, and I know I need and always search for constructive criticism. I hope mine is helpful. I will be subscribing.
Thank you, and like we said we are working on all this to help make things better . Thanks for the feedback
Could use some work tho
I First was like hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Dumb it sucked because it didnt make sense but i found myself watching th whole thing so I hope you make more episodes :)
Thanks! We are planning to make a lot more eps and make them look better as we go along!
dispite the stupid plot and crappy animation, I found myself watching the whole thing and liking it.
Yeah, I'm working on all that
pretty good, the sound needs work though, some voices are louder then others, which gets annoying.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
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a clock day story
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