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Mar 25, 2014 | 5:27 PM EDT

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Author Comments

Okay hi, sorry to bother you with my game. I'm just beginning the music sucks, sorry, the graphics aren't so good, but I promise to get better! So use the arrow keys please, again you can just mute the music. there is more to come, I am nowhere finished i have already drawn some other characters but you don't meet them the first day and the mysterious long haired one~ he is also fully drawn...So you'll see his face and his name in the finished product. Please no harsh comments, i know it's not so good, sorry. (Also my twitter if you want to be updated, you probably don't but... https://twitter.com/Futazinc )

Reviews


Em6erEm6er

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Your art was not that bad. The music part was fine its only when it was fuzzy did it start to annoy me. When she starts talking to him the grammar becomes poor. The password can be anything, which is a bit redundant to a visual novel. Any food works. I'd suggest a skip or fast forward button for the just words part. The first part was to fast to read so maybe make slower or you have to click to move on. I does not mention you need a mouse just the arrow keys. and if any art I would suggest you improve the down hair do before she has cat ears because it defies all gravity and brings down your other wise pretty good art. I am sorry if this seems like nagging or ripping on you but I thought some pointers would help you improve it, I really hope it gets accepted and you continue it I am rooting for you. Good job :)


Futaz responds:

Thank you~ ^^ i'll keep all of it in mind and make some improvements . I will improve~ ^.^