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a new series im gonna start called "classroom wars" what yall think?
good but needs more work to be considered a production imo
yea, i have production quality work comming bro, dont worry
Reminds Me Of Boondocks. Very Awesome Animation. And It Reminds Me Of What Happens At School Too. xD
lol alot of people say that ^^ thank you man
I was disappointed. It started in an appealing way, a sort of 'Home Movies' vibe, built an atmosphere, had appealing voices and I was hoping it would go for a kind of conversational style of humor. Instead, as with a lot of videos, it built up to a singular joke and then tailed off. The video was in ruins from the 'record scratch' onwards.
There's nothing wrong with the ass-in-face joke but it's too weak a gag to base a whole video on. There could've been ten more jokes in that space of time, woven in with engaging characters and dialogue. Unfortunately, the single joke is not even funny as presented here, because too much attention is drawn to it. The joke works better in a context where other stuff is going on, and it's simply something humorous that's happening. The central concept could work as a series, but it needs actual characters and more laughs. I think you could be more ambitious with it than single gags.
Good luck with your future stuff.
aww sorry man, it was a mini school project that im deciding to turn into a series, i have some serious full colored projects coming around, but yea just expresing a idea im gonna be starting
lmao, damn teachers butt right in his face lol haha
remember those days lol?
lol, no payback at the end there? I was expecting at least... something! This was awesome in its simplicity though, and the sketchy style works too, no need for color or detail, it gets the point across just fine. Keep it going!
greatly appreciate the love man, thank you :D
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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