I have learned so much.
A story of a girl coping with the depression of losing two subscribers.
Note that this was originally uploaded on Youtube.
Yes, this is based on a true story, but the true story has less time travel and diarrhea. I swear there was no diarrhea. Or One Direction singing. Seriously, stop judging me! Besides all that, most of this is very true. In reality, I lost two subscribers and spent a few days moping about it, only to realise how immature I was being. I guess this is one of the few videos I upload which have a moral or something. What is that moral? I guess it would be something along the lines of "Don't become obsessed with your subscriber count" or "Don't judge people who don't like your content" or something like that.
I have learned so much.
ok ok ok!! well....damn.
First of all I really wasnt expecting to like it as much as I did, the only reason you got a 3 and not a 5 is because the art is very lacking.
but well let me be frank, brilliant message especially to all the content creators that get very upset over peoples criticism of their work.
Now aside from the writing, dialogue, etc, let me analyze it from an artist perspective.
Style - 4/10: you seem to have your own style but still under developed. study some anatomy, do some figure drawing. also your backgrounds are just photos, which aren't bad but it feels more like you do it because your nervous to do them yourself.
Color - 5/10: colors are very simple, explore more.
Movement - 5/10: I'm a huge stickler for good motion and movement. a good book to get to make things clear is "The Animators Survival Kit" by Richard WIlliams.
keep trying, you have a great sense of humor and you put a lot of energy into your voice acting, just work on your art and you'll be amazing!
So just to be clear, you like my writing and you don't like my art. I can accept that. Thanks for the criticism. However, I find the "study some anatomy" part a bit irrelevant since the style I'm going for isn't suppose to be realistic. I'm aware that the head is far too big for the body and that the characters don't have fingers, noses, ears etc. But maybe you were referring to something else.
When it comes to the backgrounds, I'm definitely not "nervous" about drawing them. I'm just lazy. Also, I'm playing around with the idea of being a cartoon in real life. Perhaps next time I could try and make that more obvious. I agree that the animation movement could be smoother.
While you are quite a critic, I'm surprised you didn't say anything about the fuzzy audio quality, but perhaps that's only obvious if you're listening with headphones and loud volume. You can hear a strange scratchy background noise during most of the video.
Thanks for the criticism :)
I really enjoy these. Always look forward to when they come out. Keep 'em coming!
It's OK, but was that One Direction part necessary?
Now that I think about it, it probably wasn't. I just felt like putting something random in the beginning.
Hahahaha, clever end. Glitch instead of bloobers :p