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I like the concept, but there is a lot to be desired in this.
the animation so far is very limited and so as far as movement goes I can't score it very high.
However your sound quality was fantastic, the voices sound like they were recorded in an open room though rather than a sound room so that may be something to consider.
The colors are mostly primaries and secondaries, which isn't bad but its too simple. I suggest reading James Gurney's book "Color and Light".
as far as writing goes I think this was strong, just tweaking either the dialogue or having the voice actors put a little more feeling into their lines.
anyway it was nice to watch but needs some more work, I'll be looking forward to your progress on your next piece :).
Finally i get some actual feedback! thankyou haha but yes the voice work was done in a open room mainly for the main character. I have yet to really figure out background drawing so yeah i'll read that book. And as far as the voice acting yeah practice makes perfect so I'll definitely have to work on that. But once again thanks for the feedback!!!
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
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