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Mar 8, 2014 | 6:47 PM EST
  • Daily 4th Place March 9, 2014

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this is the first episode of hopefully a series. its an anime inspired action adventure with demons, samurai, and guns.
check out the youtube version here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kVbR6g415Qs&list=UUFRbN15rCFx6QKHS_2OGoBw
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buzze828buzze828

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars 1 day ago

Wow... 200 dollars is actually a pretty good deal. The extra work of walking there, the supplies and transport he should've charged more XD

Its good and I see you are exploiting clueless characters. You should develop them more before it gets to deep and can't change them. Make them more unique and eccentric. Like later on you do a riot and the guy goes hide or enter a place to make is demands and meets the desert guy.

1: give them a goal.
2: give them a way of thinking a patern.
3: Give them the backstories to explain it all
4: Just give them the means or the way to make it all happen.

Give them those and it should be better in general for storyline. If you determine those I think It should get easier to plan there next move and to give them life.



09CArventos09CArventos

Rated 5 / 5 stars 8 days ago

Cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Can't wait to see more.


TheUnseriousguy responds:

more is already out


DestinyArtsStudiosDestinyArtsStudios

Rated 3 / 5 stars May 24, 2014

not bad! but kinda has that Pico wannabee! ordeal.


TheUnseriousguy responds:

whats a pico wannabee?


herekittykittyherekittykitty

Rated 5 / 5 stars May 8, 2014

i would pay to see this on television
good animation, great plot devices, added humor, this could be the next big thing
keep shining man ☮


TheUnseriousguy responds:

thanks man :D


Don-JackimoDon-Jackimo

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars May 4, 2014

You have awesome style man!


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