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Mar 8, 2014 | 6:47 PM EST
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this is the first episode of hopefully a series. its an anime inspired action adventure with demons, samurai, and guns.
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Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

I think you need to develop further your style. I see that a there is a lot of effort invested in your pieces but overall your style isn't distinguishing from other artist, some of them with very little experience. So I hope you work on that. Yeah, also work on sounds, some stuff is too loud voices are too low. People are right, it looks more like a trailer than a real episode. Check HappyHarry's work for reference.

I am not sure I recommend.

TheUnseriousguy responds:

thanks for the criticism dude i appreciate it, but this is an old video and i have been working to improve on a lot of what you said


Rated 5 / 5 stars

The flow of the animation works well. Sound is fine. I give you a thumb up (you level up from approval). Now go forward to animate more.

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Rated 3 / 5 stars

It doesn't seem much like a first episode but more of a trailer.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Wow... 200 dollars is actually a pretty good deal. The extra work of walking there, the supplies and transport he should've charged more XD

Its good and I see you are exploiting clueless characters. You should develop them more before it gets to deep and can't change them. Make them more unique and eccentric. Like later on you do a riot and the guy goes hide or enter a place to make is demands and meets the desert guy.

1: give them a goal.
2: give them a way of thinking a patern.
3: Give them the backstories to explain it all
4: Just give them the means or the way to make it all happen.

Give them those and it should be better in general for storyline. If you determine those I think It should get easier to plan there next move and to give them life.

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