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this is the first episode of hopefully a series. its an anime inspired action adventure with demons, samurai, and guns.
check out the youtube version here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kVbR6g415Qs&list=UUFRbN15rCFx6QKHS_2OGoBw
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Althought this was the first, the voice acting is great the animation is decent but as I can see you really improved. The sound choice is amazing.
I think you need to develop further your style. I see that a there is a lot of effort invested in your pieces but overall your style isn't distinguishing from other artist, some of them with very little experience. So I hope you work on that. Yeah, also work on sounds, some stuff is too loud voices are too low. People are right, it looks more like a trailer than a real episode. Check HappyHarry's work for reference.
I am not sure I recommend.
thanks for the criticism dude i appreciate it, but this is an old video and i have been working to improve on a lot of what you said
The flow of the animation works well. Sound is fine. I give you a thumb up (you level up from approval). Now go forward to animate more.
It doesn't seem much like a first episode but more of a trailer.
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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