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i was bored and made this for the hell of it one day. i really dont think it is humanly possible to make a storyline out of it. i dunno tell me what you think. its nicely compressed and all.
Not bad, as trailers go...
It has potential... Will be interested to see if anything comes of it.
I see many people on newgrounds don't do these that well, but yoj did, so nice work on that, but I feel that you need to improve on your graphics and animations in the future, they didnt look so hot and brought down the movie altogether.
Not A Bad Trailer
It's a good trailer for the fact it gives the viewer a taste of what to expect, but no indication of who is who. It makes one curious how all of these elements will come together (even though we already know there's nothing more to come at the present according to the Author's Comments). The guy in the hood doesn't necessarily have to be the bad guy and the guy in love doesn't have to be good. My one suggestion to improve this piece is to make each scene a bit shorter because it's killing the pacing of the trailer. Each scene would be more effective if they lasted as long as a heartbeat.
Other than that minor point, this is an excellent piece. It's very well drawn and does its job as a trailer. And, yes, it IS humanly possible to make a story out of this because it contains all of the elements you'll find in any great book of suspense and intrigue. Work on the story because it seems you have a good thing here! Best o' luck!
I nearly fell asleep when I watched this trailer, but anyway... not bad.
the evil dude should have a sword
and run around a big house or something.
and like grab ppl through hidden doors and stuff
and KILL THEM ALL!
and the house should be locked and boarded up
so they cant escape!!
ps.im on crack
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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