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FiND OUT HOW CROAKY DOKEY LEARNED TO SWiM AND SAVED THE DAY!
Children's animated story.
Great work on this animation, however I've noticed a few inconsistencies. Many frames repeat, there are numerous animations that are repetitive, and some of the animations are inconsistent with whatelse is going on with the rest of the scenes and animation. The narrator's voice more than makes up for the lack of music, but I can't help but feel much of the sound effects are out of place. Background sound effects seem to be the exception and sound great - the ambiance set by it is good and seems second to none compared to what I've seen in a lot of animation.
Great animation, and cool story. Would have been 5 stars if not for the creepy, breathy, whispering and dead pan voice over. It sounds like you are a serial killer talking under a blanket while trying not to wake up your latest victim!
Speak up, especially for kid focused material. You need to sound bright and less murdery.
Good work otherwise though.
I understand that this is for children but it needs a little work on the animation quality and the voice work. It seems like you tripped up or stuttered a few times while you were recording. All in all, not a bad video. Should make it past the filters without any problems.
hope this dosent get blammed 5 stars to not get blammed
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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