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I recreated FL-Nordrin's popular Changing Scenery. I had nothing to do but recreating something I REALLY like. So This came up.
This is not your best animation what you have made in my opinion. There are a few things that can be fixed in this animation. First of all probably the most noticeable thing in this animation is the sloppy line work for the characters. Second is that the characters don't have colored heads and you could see right through them. The effects seem like they where a little rushed. The animation was good. I would like to see a little bit of some improvement in your next stick figure fight, or any fight in that case. I have looked at your stick figure fights on youtube and they where a lot better then this animation in my opininon. Try harder next time. Good luck with your future projects.
Thanks for your review. Anyways, it wasn't colored because the original had no colour at all. Plus, colored heads are not included. I agree, the line is sloppy. But I tried my best to replicate the effects with the original. But, I'll try my best next time.
Thanks man for your honest response. :D
You could try comparing if you want: http://www.hyunsdojo.com/dojo/1263/
Its a disservice to recreate something you "really like" only to submit poorly animated rubbish. Backgrounds obscure your words at the start, everything looks like it was rushed and not well thought out. Kinda looks like a nine year old kid with MS animated this. Sorry to anyone with MS, but yea. One star for the obviously half asses effort put into this digital abortion. Would have been one and a half, but this crap loops. Aint nobody got time for that.
Do you even animate?
not bad little loud though
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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