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Feb 17, 2014 | 7:16 AM EST

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!- This is the 5th ep for part 1 -!
kurumi matsuokais living alone her father ran away and left a debt one day some one gets inside her apartment and attacking her and then carl black a young detective saves her...

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StichInTymeStichInTyme

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Great way to end the first volume! eagerly awaiting part two now. They keep getting better. I think you are really starting to hit your stride with these. I told you they would catch on eventually! great work and keep it up!


shokomomi responds:

thank you (\\\^-^\\\)♥♥♥


MoonbrightMoonbright

Rated 3 / 5 stars

It's really interesting *o* I want mooooore

Oh, yes. For me, a novel visual IS A GAME.


shokomomi responds:

thank you i see a visual novel as a game too ♥♥♥


SomeGurlGamerSomeGurlGamer

Rated 5 / 5 stars

I want soooooooooooooooo much more!! ;_:


shokomomi responds:

im working on chapter two but it will take some time becase of school tests annoying (T-T)

thank you so much for reading !!♥♥♥


blackiris42blackiris42

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Honestly, I'm enjoying this so far. The story has me wanting more every time, and I always find myself coming back!


shokomomi responds:

(\\\:^:\\\) thank you sob*


dkv326dkv326

Rated 2 / 5 stars

i think it's a good story, but it's not a game.


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shokomomi responds:

yes i know but i didn't knew where to put it and actually it is a game its called visual novel no never mind it your right thanks for reading