i don't speak japanese so i don't know what this story is about
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kurumi matsuokais living alone her father ran away and left a debt one day some one gets inside her apartment and attacking her and then carl black a young detective saves her...
even though this was not a game, it was still a pleasent story and the art work was quite nice.
I love this VN. The grammar is a little off but so far it's great. I can't wait for the one. Excited!!!!!!!!
shokomomi responds:
thank you so much i know the grammar is bad english is not my mother language so its a little hard for me...
Nice artwork and the story hooks you in because of the horror part, but in my opinion the whole thing is too fast paced. Great work tho :)
shokomomi responds:
well i did wrote it about a year ago so you're right thank you for reading ♥
Good artwork, nice story, but I keep having to restart when Kurumi goes to bed and gets attacked again and again. I have yet to hear about the detective "Carl Black" mentioned in the description so obviously there should be more. I presume this is either a glitch or that I am missing something I should be doing, however I have clicked everything in the scenes so far and got no response of any kind. This might have been less infuriating if there had been some cool background music! A good effort, I will definitely keep an eye out for some fixes on this as I liked where the story was going.
shokomomi responds:
thank you (\\>^<\\) but the chapters are really short so this is why you didnt saw carl yet im sorry and thank you so much.