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Feb 15, 2014 | 6:51 AM EST

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kurumi matsuokais living alone her father ran away and left a debt one day some one gets inside her apartment and attacking her and then carl black a young detective saves her...

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dragongirl4200dragongirl4200

Rated 4 / 5 stars

I love this VN. The grammar is a little off but so far it's great. I can't wait for the one. Excited!!!!!!!!


shokomomi responds:

thank you so much i know the grammar is bad english is not my mother language so its a little hard for me...


NightOwl5NightOwl5

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Nice artwork and the story hooks you in because of the horror part, but in my opinion the whole thing is too fast paced. Great work tho :)


shokomomi responds:

well i did wrote it about a year ago so you're right thank you for reading ♥


Grayboy90Grayboy90

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Good artwork, nice story, but I keep having to restart when Kurumi goes to bed and gets attacked again and again. I have yet to hear about the detective "Carl Black" mentioned in the description so obviously there should be more. I presume this is either a glitch or that I am missing something I should be doing, however I have clicked everything in the scenes so far and got no response of any kind. This might have been less infuriating if there had been some cool background music! A good effort, I will definitely keep an eye out for some fixes on this as I liked where the story was going.


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shokomomi responds:

thank you (\\>^<\\) but the chapters are really short so this is why you didnt saw carl yet im sorry and thank you so much.


TheVashManTheVashMan

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Mediocre


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shokomomi responds:

yes you see i drew this about a year ago so the drawing is no good but on the ext 4 ep its getting better thank you for reading (\\^-^\\)


aliceliddlealiceliddle

Rated 2 / 5 stars

its a good story and the artwork is okay but there defintly should be some music added


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shokomomi responds:

somehow i cant add music im sorry thank you for reading