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Romeo and Juliet. Act II, Scene vi.
Background: Larry of Karryon Episode 2. (Author: Jazza Studios)
It sounds like a play; and by some other responses to review I see this is an attempt at improving (or so I gather); but you can do better. Keep it up, you'll get better.
SUBTITLES (I cannot stress that enough)
An Intro - Where are they? Which city? who's library? And Why are they there?!! Because I do not have a clue!!
Yeah. The problem is I am 14, and currently am not very good at Voice Acting any male character, with the exception if I edit my voice, like my video above.
Not bad! I would like to see addition or option to see subtitles!
How do I go about this?
If you're going to borrow a background, at least credit the original artist. Larry of Karryon, episode 2. I'm assuming you nabbed the background from one of the reference files he gives out in his tutorials? For shame, my man. For shame.
Yeah, I just did this for a school project. I will credit it now. Thanks for helping, had a huge deadline. Sorry for not crediting! Thanks for reminding me! You saved me from a submission ban! I apologize for making anyone mad or discrediting the original Author (JazzaStudios). Where does he give out tutorials? I just Photoshoped the background where the Wizard was when I took my screenshot. I just masked where he was. Anyway, it would be great if you could give that link to his tutorials, given I am still terrible at Flash!
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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