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The Deadly T-Shirt

rated 3.38 / 5 stars
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Comedy - Original

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Feb 7, 2014 | 3:39 PM EST
  • Daily 5th Place February 8, 2014

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Author Comments

Just to be clear at first, THIS IS MY SECOND ANIMATION EVER!
JUST TO BE CLEAR AS WELL! I did try to create in Oney's style. I'm not copying it and proclaiming it to be mine.
Before I made this animation... WooleyWorld told me that breast cancer would piss off a lot of people if I wasn't funny... I hope I was funny enough!

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Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

I don't really get it. The label says to remove before doing stuff, and then the chick removes it, but bad shit still happens? What happened didn't seem to fit with the poses and expressions of the characters on the "start" screen. Some of the faces were funny. I thought the face in the trees was a nice touch, and the coughing "cought" me off guard, eheeeeehhhh. But it was only while typing this up that I started to think back and start laughing to myself.

You were obviously inspired by Oney(if the English word "Oney" in the fake Japanese subtitles wasn't clear enough), which is cool, he's a very talented animator with his own personal brand of humor and I'm sure he's flattered.

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LemKuuja responds:

I WAS inspired by Oney. I did also put it in the tags XD
The idea was they both got T-Shirts, the chick removes the label on her own. and the guy doesn't care. so he dies of breast cancer!
I didn't really put as much as effort as possible in this, besides. Do not expect much, since it is my second animation of all time and I'm still improving!
Thank you for your review! :D


Rated 4 / 5 stars

This was not half bad for your second animation. The overall joke was nice. The bits that were like oney was nice as a starting point but it would be great to find your own unique way to animation so you dont have to hear all the "your copying oney/whoever" down the road ,but everyone has to start from somewhere. The only bad thing I can say was the JudeMedli voice actress. She was great but you really couldn't tell what she was saying. Other then that great job hope to see more

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LemKuuja responds:

Yeah, she's not much of a great voice actor. But she helped me alot along the way, besides she's my girlfriend... So I put her in the video to show her how much I do appreciate what she did!
Thank you for your review, I'm quite flattered!


Rated 5 / 5 stars

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LemKuuja responds:

Uhhh... thanks?


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Was pretty decent. Had too many faces, voice was kinda louder in da mic and unsynced at certain points, and humor was ok. Overall pretty good for your second animation.

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LemKuuja responds:

We recorded with a phone, because we don't have a high quality mic.
I'm still improving, I will become better at some point! Thanks for your review!


Rated 5 / 5 stars

I think this was hillarious and it had a touch of tragedy , a tragedy comedy nice:) And congrats you did an amazing job for your 2nd time time doing an animation , now I guess I should stop being lazy and start animating stuff instead of critiquing others lol. But I never give wasteful, negative, fucktard reviews, all animators deserve an honest review that inspires them to do better :) But in my opinion u did a terrific job. Thanks for the submission :) Cant wait to see more.

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LemKuuja responds:

That's really nice of you! Thanks!