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The Deadly T-Shirt

rated 3.37 / 5 stars
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Comedy - Original

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Feb 7, 2014 | 3:39 PM EST

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Author Comments

Just to be clear at first, THIS IS MY SECOND ANIMATION EVER!
JUST TO BE CLEAR AS WELL! I did try to create in Oney's style. I'm not copying it and proclaiming it to be mine.
Before I made this animation... WooleyWorld told me that breast cancer would piss off a lot of people if I wasn't funny... I hope I was funny enough!

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Rated 2 / 5 stars

I see someone is a fan of Oney's animations. It was nonsensical, but not in that special way that people like Stamper, Oney, and Psychicpebbles nail. Keep tryin', bud, they all started somewhere.

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LemKuuja responds:

Appreciated, I did try to copy Oney's style since I really liked it!
However during the animation process, I realized I wasn't so comfy with it.
But it was too late to back down. My next work will be different and a lot more like my style.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not a bad start! Keep an eye (or ear) out for sound clipping. The animation ran fairly smooth and was good for a quick laugh. Some well timed sound effects, but others were a bit of a distraction. Can certainly see the "Oney influence" in your facial animations. It fit well in the hospital scene, but don't hesitate to keep adding your own spin to it!

Last piece of advice I have I've shared with many. Newgrounds and YouTube are two very different entities. Keep the self promotion and subscription pleas for YouTube. On NG, if your work is worthy of merit, you will receive it.

Looking forward to seeing how you develop as creators. Keep at it and nice job thus far.

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Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

plot holes if even got a plot
got lovely moments but overall hardly satisfying

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LemKuuja responds:

It's my second animation! So don't expect much, I'm still improving. Thank you for your reply!


Rated 5 / 5 stars


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LemKuuja responds:

Thank you :)


Rated 2 / 5 stars

Ok animation, but there were too many reading rage face comics but without a plot

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LemKuuja responds:

Yeah, I did feel that too myself... But I never did expected it to go on frontpage that fast!
Thank you for your review, though. I'm improving and I will become better sooner or later.