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Feb 7, 2014 | 3:39 PM EST
  • Daily 5th Place February 8, 2014

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Author Comments

Just to be clear at first, THIS IS MY SECOND ANIMATION EVER!
JUST TO BE CLEAR AS WELL! I did try to create in Oney's style. I'm not copying it and proclaiming it to be mine.
Before I made this animation... WooleyWorld told me that breast cancer would piss off a lot of people if I wasn't funny... I hope I was funny enough!

Watch on YouTube:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y8E49zMjCbs

Reviews


DarkstrategyDarkstrategy

Rated 2 / 5 stars

I see someone is a fan of Oney's animations. It was nonsensical, but not in that special way that people like Stamper, Oney, and Psychicpebbles nail. Keep tryin', bud, they all started somewhere.


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KimoLemonHead responds:

Appreciated, I did try to copy Oney's style since I really liked it!
However during the animation process, I realized I wasn't so comfy with it.
But it was too late to back down. My next work will be different and a lot more like my style.


DeathofyouDeathofyou

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not a bad start! Keep an eye (or ear) out for sound clipping. The animation ran fairly smooth and was good for a quick laugh. Some well timed sound effects, but others were a bit of a distraction. Can certainly see the "Oney influence" in your facial animations. It fit well in the hospital scene, but don't hesitate to keep adding your own spin to it!

Last piece of advice I have I've shared with many. Newgrounds and YouTube are two very different entities. Keep the self promotion and subscription pleas for YouTube. On NG, if your work is worthy of merit, you will receive it.

Looking forward to seeing how you develop as creators. Keep at it and nice job thus far.


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NewRebornNewReborn

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

plot holes if even got a plot
got lovely moments but overall hardly satisfying


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KimoLemonHead responds:

It's my second animation! So don't expect much, I'm still improving. Thank you for your reply!


AcanderAcander

Rated 5 / 5 stars

HILARIOUS! GREAT SONG CHOICE!!!


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KimoLemonHead responds:

Thank you :)


vicvipervicviper

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Ok animation, but there were too many faces..like reading rage face comics but without a plot


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KimoLemonHead responds:

Yeah, I did feel that too myself... But I never did expected it to go on frontpage that fast!
Thank you for your review, though. I'm improving and I will become better sooner or later.