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Feb 7, 2014 | 3:39 PM EST
  • Daily 5th Place February 8, 2014

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Just to be clear at first, THIS IS MY SECOND ANIMATION EVER!
JUST TO BE CLEAR AS WELL! I did try to create in Oney's style. I'm not copying it and proclaiming it to be mine.
Before I made this animation... WooleyWorld told me that breast cancer would piss off a lot of people if I wasn't funny... I hope I was funny enough!

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Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not a bad start! Keep an eye (or ear) out for sound clipping. The animation ran fairly smooth and was good for a quick laugh. Some well timed sound effects, but others were a bit of a distraction. Can certainly see the "Oney influence" in your facial animations. It fit well in the hospital scene, but don't hesitate to keep adding your own spin to it!

Last piece of advice I have I've shared with many. Newgrounds and YouTube are two very different entities. Keep the self promotion and subscription pleas for YouTube. On NG, if your work is worthy of merit, you will receive it.

Looking forward to seeing how you develop as creators. Keep at it and nice job thus far.

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Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

plot holes if even got a plot
got lovely moments but overall hardly satisfying

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KimoLemonHead responds:

It's my second animation! So don't expect much, I'm still improving. Thank you for your reply!


Rated 5 / 5 stars


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KimoLemonHead responds:

Thank you :)


Rated 2 / 5 stars

Ok animation, but there were too many reading rage face comics but without a plot

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KimoLemonHead responds:

Yeah, I did feel that too myself... But I never did expected it to go on frontpage that fast!
Thank you for your review, though. I'm improving and I will become better sooner or later.


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

I don't really get it. The label says to remove before doing stuff, and then the chick removes it, but bad shit still happens? What happened didn't seem to fit with the poses and expressions of the characters on the "start" screen. Some of the faces were funny. I thought the face in the trees was a nice touch, and the coughing "cought" me off guard, eheeeeehhhh. But it was only while typing this up that I started to think back and start laughing to myself.

You were obviously inspired by Oney(if the English word "Oney" in the fake Japanese subtitles wasn't clear enough), which is cool, he's a very talented animator with his own personal brand of humor and I'm sure he's flattered.

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KimoLemonHead responds:

I WAS inspired by Oney. I did also put it in the tags XD
The idea was they both got T-Shirts, the chick removes the label on her own. and the guy doesn't care. so he dies of breast cancer!
I didn't really put as much as effort as possible in this, besides. Do not expect much, since it is my second animation of all time and I'm still improving!
Thank you for your review! :D