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Feb 7, 2014 | 3:39 PM EST
  • Daily 5th Place February 8, 2014

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Just to be clear at first, THIS IS MY SECOND ANIMATION EVER!
JUST TO BE CLEAR AS WELL! I did try to create in Oney's style. I'm not copying it and proclaiming it to be mine.
Before I made this animation... WooleyWorld told me that breast cancer would piss off a lot of people if I wasn't funny... I hope I was funny enough!

Watch on YouTube:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y8E49zMjCbs

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Cyruss2089Cyruss2089

Rated 4 / 5 stars February 12, 2014

Hey, this gave me a good laugh. So what if you were inspired by someone else's art style,
"Even in literature and art, no man who bothers about originality will ever be original: whereas if you simply try to tell the truth (without caring twopence how often it has been told before) you will, nine times out of ten, become original without ever having noticed it." C.S. Lewis

Keep up the good work!


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KimoLemonHead responds:

I love you, man...


kimsgrimkimsgrim

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars February 12, 2014

Oney clone 100%


KimoLemonHead responds:

I was inspired by Oney... I did even mention it in the goddamn tags and subs... Geez, fagget...


kailthouskailthous

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars February 11, 2014

i feel like your trying to emulate someone elses style but not quite catching up to their level of animation


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KimoLemonHead responds:

True, I did try to copy Oney since I really like the way he does shit. I will be doing my own style in the next animation.


DarkstrategyDarkstrategy

Rated 2 / 5 stars February 11, 2014

I see someone is a fan of Oney's animations. It was nonsensical, but not in that special way that people like Stamper, Oney, and Psychicpebbles nail. Keep tryin', bud, they all started somewhere.


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KimoLemonHead responds:

Appreciated, I did try to copy Oney's style since I really liked it!
However during the animation process, I realized I wasn't so comfy with it.
But it was too late to back down. My next work will be different and a lot more like my style.


DeathofyouDeathofyou

Rated 3 / 5 stars February 11, 2014

Not a bad start! Keep an eye (or ear) out for sound clipping. The animation ran fairly smooth and was good for a quick laugh. Some well timed sound effects, but others were a bit of a distraction. Can certainly see the "Oney influence" in your facial animations. It fit well in the hospital scene, but don't hesitate to keep adding your own spin to it!

Last piece of advice I have I've shared with many. Newgrounds and YouTube are two very different entities. Keep the self promotion and subscription pleas for YouTube. On NG, if your work is worthy of merit, you will receive it.

Looking forward to seeing how you develop as creators. Keep at it and nice job thus far.


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