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Jan 21, 2014 | 5:46 AM EST

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This was my first animated film, please feel free to comment and give me any feedback. Love this site and it was one of the reasons why i went on to do a career in animation...
There will be plenty to come :)



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Nice animation. But noot good. Do it better. Please. Because there's good idea. With better graphics, it could be masterpiese.


Rated 4 / 5 stars

You did good for a first timer. The story was original, while the music was perhaps a little bit too repetitive. And while, it could be a little laggy at times, it was good. Keep it up!

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Rated 4 / 5 stars

This is fantastic for your first animation! Not perfect, but still well done. With this being your first animation, I can see lots of improvement and success as an animator. Keep up the good work!

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Rated 4 / 5 stars

good story, great animation for a first time, a little bit choppy at times, and I would recommend using a different piece of music (it was repetitive) but otherwise, great job.

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