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A space pirate who we only know as "the captain" and his misbegotten adventures with his crew.... Gary. My first finished animation!
You've definitely got the basics for animation. This was relatively fluid, and well timed... There are always a few anomalies in the beginning so don't let little stuff get you down. You have some potential here, even for bordering on hilarity, though it takes work... and time. Plot development... I can honestly say, I hadn't heard of someone enlisting the help of a fly to attempt a coup before, so great work there... Somehow, it seems like there should be something more one can do with this... I hope you can follow through, and remember:
Master Musashi said, "...All things are difficult in the beginning."
Thanks Mad! I appreciate the constructive criticism and you can definitely expect more!
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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