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Jan 15, 2014 | 11:53 PM EST
  • Daily Feature January 17, 2014

Author Comments

Aahh! This took way longer than expected, but was a huge learning experience. This entire voice clip was fabricated by Chris Zambelis, who goes by SeiyruRenaih. Thanks so much for making the track!

I'd also like to say sorry for making promises I couldn't keep and talking about a deadline that was 3 months late. Nonetheless I hope you all enjoy this flash! This is actually my first "full-length-colored-tomato-flash", at least since 2009.

Also thanks CooliSushi for pumping out the backgrounds, ya' really saved me ass ya' did.

Also, check out the YouTube version if you like!



Rated 2 / 5 stars January 17, 2014

Overall I just found it sort of obnoxious and not very funny. it was just generic to me, there was nothing really unique about it or anything new it brought to the table of videos like this. Animation was kind of choppy and uninteresting to look at. It almost seemed like the video was trying to make some sort of point or something I guess, and if it was, it didn't work. The only thing I found okay was the twist at the end. Voices were decent quality, though the kid was kind of annoying to listen to.

It's not that bad for a first submission, and considering that, you might be on the road to somewhere, but I would seriously suggest polishing the animation, working on the humor and writing and basically everything in general.

Mallowin responds:

Thanks, I appreciate the review! The writing wasn't actually mine, (personally I thought the comedy was a mix of ridiculous irony and "genuine" morals) but I'll take full credit for any choppyness you saw in the animation. I actually spent weeks shading all the frames, but as a review had noted in the past, not everything is completely animated.

Congrats for being my first "stern and thorough" review!


Rated 5 / 5 stars January 17, 2014

really steven you go through all of that!

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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars January 17, 2014

Gotta love that ironic humor.

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Rated 5 / 5 stars January 17, 2014


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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars January 17, 2014

Funny, crazy, and so true, xD

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