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Jan 15, 2014 | 11:53 PM EST
  • Daily Feature January 17, 2014

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Author Comments

Aahh! This took way longer than expected, but was a huge learning experience. This entire voice clip was fabricated by Chris Zambelis, who goes by SeiyruRenaih. Thanks so much for making the track!

I'd also like to say sorry for making promises I couldn't keep and talking about a deadline that was 3 months late. Nonetheless I hope you all enjoy this flash! This is actually my first "full-length-colored-tomato-flash", at least since 2009.

Also thanks CooliSushi for pumping out the backgrounds, ya' really saved me ass ya' did.

Also, check out the YouTube version if you like!



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars January 18, 2014

So I just came back from 'What I hate about the club', which I was sadly disappointed in, and came to this flash. I wanted to see it because of its simple animation and give it a chance, and I am glad I did!
The voice talents are pretty hilarious and the ending was definitely unexpected. The balloons popping was excellent humor, and just... lol. I wish this was longer. Seriously.
The only thing that would have made it better would have been if you had the two friends in the end doing a reaction or when Steven left and told them the news. Yeah, I don't like cliff hangers, but that doesn't really effect your ratings!
4.5! Awesome.

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Rated 5 / 5 stars January 18, 2014



Rated 5 / 5 stars January 18, 2014

I was curious how you were going to wrap this up. You did it with a big hilarious bow. "Steven, you're grounded." Well done!

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Rated 5 / 5 stars January 17, 2014

Hahaha. This actually made me laugh. The joke itself, on it's face, isn't really that funny, but the timing and delivery is good that it works. I loved the popping sound, and I especially loved that Steven gave the whole monologue at the end with only one baloon boobie left. Simple and funny, how can I not love this?

Mallowin responds:

Yeah, I didn't want the speech to be taken too seriously otherwise people might have been turned away from the comedy itself. I added in the popping sounds for extra effect, and I figured the timing worked pretty well with the balloon pops.

Thanks a bunch!


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars January 17, 2014

I thought this was funny and different, but the actual speech about women's bodies at the end could have been worded better. The intent got sort of muddled with clumsy phrasing.
Not sure why the bartender was the grandpa, and where did the other two friends go...? That was confusing. And I think the speech at the end would have made more sense if the bartender had suggested showing of tits in lieu of ID rather than the kid... just little things. Overall I liked the style.

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Mallowin responds:

I actually didn't write this script, I animated it, but I would say Chris has done a great job with it. The Bartender was made clear he was the grandpa in the end, and this was used as the ending's "WOAH TWIST!". As for the friends not being shown after the first scene, my intention was to show all three of the characters standing outside, but I wanted to enforce the fact they were only minor characters, so I ended up hollowing them out in the silhouette and making everything black. This also worked great with not revealing Steven's outfit until his first line to the bartender. I considered showing them at the door sticking their faces in during the monologue, but that would have driven the attention away too much after introducing them so quickly. Lastly, I personally believe it's up for the viewer to make the inference that the kid's mother is an incestial whore. (lol)

Thanks a ton for the review!