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A short cartoon about online dating.
I, do not have a lot to say ths time. As always i find your flash animations to be quite interesting. Over all there is room to improve naturally. I still support you! Sincerely, updown343
Thanks a lot. You make me feel like making a lot more movies.
This made me laugh,at the dinner and sex scene. I wonder how my date would react if i said what he said at the table in a crowed place. The sex scene was funny because non of them removed their any part of their clothes, and she became 8 months pregnant instantly. Even if you don't like drawing that type of things (nudity), there are other ways to portray sex.
Now the constructive criticism. The animation could use some work, and so can the background details. the main part about the bg I'm referring too is the restaurant.
Keep at it flash, I did get a big lol with this. Thats a good thing.
I am glad the scene at the dinner table made you laugh. Thank you for the constructive criticism. Yes my animation skills need to be improved and I can only do this by making more cartoons. I think I better work harder at making an attractive background for my next submission. Thanks again ClimbLadders.
The voice acting was horible, and the proportions and movement was so off. My god.
i will try to improve the movement of my character. I wanted unusual proportions for the female because I thought it looked more like a cartoon that way.
My eyes bled first at the worst drawing I've ever seen.
Then my ears bled as Donald Duck screamed into the mike.
Then my soul bled when you made it sexual.
My finger now bleeds as I do my duty, and blam this piece of crap.
I think you are exaggerating because the art work is not that bad. There is nothing wrong with Donald Duck. If your soul bled over a sexy dance, you are living like a hermit. Your review may have a lot of bull in it! Sorry you found this to be a piece of crap. I will try to improve my next submission,so you can sign up for my fan list. please next time, Chill out!!!!!
Thanks...........Until the end when they grew old together.
Can't beat that game!!
It's Payday Fellas !
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