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This was one of my first animations :-)
So enjoy :-3
this really sucks big time there is no story no plot and the knight says nothing.
The dude in armour was a bit too quiet. The purple guy, did a pretty good job at it. It would be nice if when it ended, you had to hit replay so it didn't keep on playing. You should also work on the lip sync and the way you shape their mouths when they speak.
There isn't a lot of motion. All of the animation looks a bit jumpy. Not much tweening was done to smooth it out. There also isn't any real conclusion to the story.
It would also be appreciated if you include a preloader in your next flash. You can download an official Newgrounds preloader under Community > Downloads.
bad voice acting not a good animation and no story
Thanks for your criticism i will keep trying
to improve myself in every way.
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