This Really Brings Back Memories Of When I Watched This On YouTube, Funny Enough I Made A Comic Series Based Off Of It. (Not On The Internet) But This Really Shaped My Story Telling As Well! And You Are Also One Of The Animators That Inspired Me To Make My Own!
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Yeah! First episode is out!
I wanna thank my Aunt Ellie and Uncle Randall once again, you guys are still great. Tobuscus, StormRedDesert, and Shadokun from Youtube, you guys and your videos are awesome. The Genre says Action because it will get more exciting and the second episode will be longer, I promise. I just figured out "Save and Compact" does.
Howdja guys like it so far? And BTW, if you want a custom Sonic character to be in the backround, PM me a description and I'll see what I can do. Enjoy;
Forgotten Warriors, the Son of Sonic: Episode 1 "Slow Beginnings"!
THE DISAPEARING CHAIR!!!
89animegirl responds:
Whaaaa....?
being a fan of sonic since i was like five i grew up playing the games watching the show .
but as a 23 year old i haven't looked at any thing sonic in ages with out cringing at all the fan made stuff and i started to fall out with it all and i saw soooooo many shows that just weren't very good . This is the First iv really liked in years and been able to happily sit start to finish and watch it all , nice job! it must of taken a long time and i look forward to eps 2 its got the feel of satAM sonic the hedgehog witch i loved at a kid.
my only pointers would be if you have the chance grab a few more voice actors. and id love to see a bit tighter animation in the future but for just your second post its fringing AWESOME and animation only gets better with loads and loads and loooooads of practice and constant crashing from flash
Great job
89animegirl responds:
Thanks so much for the encouragement!
Not bad for a first episode, I'm glad you took my advice about the Logo in the intro. There are only a few things I'd like to critique about. Voices. I woild like to see an improvement in sound quality. If your not using a sound recording program I recommend Audacity for voicing. You can normalize voices which is really useful. Also try and put a little emotion into the voices. They sound kind of stale. For my Mario series, I get worked up trying to put myself in the scene I'm trying to voice. Besides that, I only have a problem with how short the episode was. I know drawing animation is super hard so I don't mind waiting for a longer episode. I really would like you to continue the series to see where this will go. Don't give up. Good Luck
Sonic has a lot of fan made work, let's put that out there. I watched this expecting it to be absolute crap, but I'm appalled by how wrong I was. There 's a lot of potential here and there's a lot to be proud of. Congrats so far, and I expect a lot of improvement in the future.
