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This is about a stickman who is forced to run through a obstacle course.
this is your first animation so i am not Going to blam this. =)
Barely an obstacle course, it looks like something you would see out of a platformer.
The story is unoriginal, you could of made it so that instead of him dying, someone close to him dies, or random people would die. Sure they aren't exactly original, but it could spice up your animation
Also the stick dude managed to navigate the "Obstacle Course" perfectly, it would of been nice to see him a bit more worried/anxious/nervous or just plain 'ol struggling to complete the "Obstacle Course".
Also a backstory, while it isn't necessary, it could definitely improve the animation.
Finally, when the guy completes the maze, there is no door for him to escape to, why?
The graphics are mediocre at best for some people, but for your first animation they are good.
If you want to make more stuff like this, then please do. While it is a long way from this point you have potential to make something great. Keep it up
Ok animation... Nothing really happened... Quite boring
You could have made this quite a lot better by adding some more stickmen into the mix and having a few die.. In interesting ways of course.
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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