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Dec 17, 2013 | 3:48 PM EST

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Love is a harsh game.

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liljimliljim

Rated 2 / 5 stars December 18, 2013

You ought to spend a bit more time developing these ideas and honing your skills. They're the start of something great - I enjoyed both this and Cloud Watchers. Looking forward to more from you, just take your time with the next one!

If you're stuck for plots etc, you might want to team up with other people
http://www.newgrounds.com/collab/browse/artist



PiVisualsPiVisuals

Rated 2 / 5 stars December 18, 2013

I like the idea and the punchline. However, I think it was a little confusing. I assume the lizard in the middle thought the other lizard was interested in it but was really digging the third lizard.

One suggestion that might have cleared things up a little would have been to have the middle lizard and the other lizard in the same shot in the beginning to help better set the scene for what's going on.

Still, I think you had a good idea going. Also, I enjoyed the music during the lizard's push ups!


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toxicbombtoxicbomb

Rated 2 / 5 stars December 17, 2013

It was funny but kinda hard to understand..



DeathHaikuDeathHaiku

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars December 17, 2013

The animation was kinda sloppy and the whole scenario was hard to make sense out of. Why is the one lizard magically afflicted with pink eye at the end?


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BaconFool responds:

Thank you for your honest opinion, it really helps me acknowledge and strengthen my weaknesses!