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Dec 12, 2013 | 10:38 AM EST

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Author Comments

this is my first actual animation. it was the final project for my intro to animation class. i've gotten mixed feedback on this and i don't believe it's as good as it could have been, but i don't plan on coming back to this to improve it so i'm just uploading it as is. criticism and advice is encouraged and appreciated

Reviews


skiter90skiter90

Rated 4 / 5 stars

For a first time very well done, the music flows nicely with the visuals I'm sure we will see you progress as you post more.



MKelley21MKelley21

Rated 5 / 5 stars

good song


SLAMHOUSE responds:

Haha yeah I thought so, too, but now I'd prefer to never hear it again after all the times I listened to it while making this.


ClaytronClaytron

Rated 3 / 5 stars

For a first animation you have done really well in regards to transitioning between scenes, and the general flow of the movie.
I kinda liked the animation style, but can understand why people may not appreciate it - the graphics look a little rushed.
The sync between the music and the animation was great!!

I think you have the ability to produce quality work in the near future, just need to spend more time working on the animation!


SLAMHOUSE responds:

Thank you! Yes I'll admit some parts were rushed, and they do show. I spent as much time on this as I could, but eventually I just got so tired of this one project and wanted to work on something else.

Thanks for the feedback!


rararawrararaw

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Amazing animation, Keep the good work.

But I still didn't hunderstand the history .


SLAMHOUSE responds:

Thanks, and yeah I agree with what you said about the history. By history I assume you meant the pacing, yeah? The downfall with this song is that it's really fast paced so syncing things up with the music can get pretty hectic from a fresh pair of eyes. The actual song is about two minutes, where this video is a little over one minute. My project's time was supposed to be one minute, so there was only enough time to get that much done. I know these things don't really make up for uploading this, but I can assure you and anyone else watching/reading that I can do better and will do better in the future.

Anyway, thanks for the feedback!