The story telling could be better ... much better ... but the mental image at the end was glorious

Images just flash up, not long enough to even see ONE pixel of it. Also, the voice isn't smooth, just stuttering kids. Potential but.. not really a animation to be watched.

jcvj

Well, you could have made these pop-up pictures stand a little longere.
Quite originally style though, i like it.

Ahh, I know where you got the style of making this flash from. Nonetheless, it's pretty good.