I think I missed the joke. Audio is horrible. I would suggest not talking directly towards the mic next time. Drawings looked nice. Would have been much better if they were actually animated.
EDIT: I forgot to mention this was an assignment done for my leadership class, and my supplies were pretty limited, but I guess it's okay, more real cartoons to be made soon!
I sort of animated it in Game Grumps Animated style, so yeah.
Yes as you can tell, the recording quality is bad, but I only had my ear buds to record with. And it was only a few seconds because I only needed for lines to get full credit, and I only had two hours to get it done.
I think I missed the joke. Audio is horrible. I would suggest not talking directly towards the mic next time. Drawings looked nice. Would have been much better if they were actually animated.
This was made during school, I didn't have a proper microphone there, and there really was no joke, it was for an assignment I had to turn in.
First of all, I don't get your Punchline, Second it's too short.... Third of all good Voice Acting but make sure characters mouth Moves..... Dude no offense but it's not humorous like haha funny it's like you've underestimating the Punchline of the Joke... This is just horrible of 10 seconds of stupidity I can make about 48 hours a flash that is funnier than that But I decided not to because I'm on a break however, This flash Sucks because I don't get the Joke... It's not Hilarious but a HUGE waste of 10 seconds! Seriously It has to be improved or else I won't view your Flashes anymore.. Just take more time animating your characters it's that Complex dude! Try your best and it shall pass.... That's the only advice I'll give you!
To be honest with you, I can agree. I didn't really think it would be that funny, and that was okay. It was only ten seconds cause it was an assignment for this thing I needed to turn in related to conversations, so it was more of a test than a real cartoon. I promise to make more real cartoons, with my actual decent microphone cause like I said before, I was limited of supplies due to me making this during school. (Yes, I have a computer class which I installed a portable Flash 8 and used that.)
In all honesty your characters seem to resemble Eddsworld, while I could understand drawing inspiration, characters with hoodies have now become a icon for Eddsworld rip-offs I like to play around with characters give them clothes you don't see very often. Also the audio quality was rather poor while I can sympathize that you didn't have a proper mic it was still rather rough. Overall the cartoon was below average, the animation was jumpy and why no lip synching? I understand some cartoons can get away with that but only if you where taking audio directly from game grumps. I've seen some of your stuff and it entirely resembles Eddsworld, the characters body structure along with wardrobe. There was also no attempt to create a background or even put a nice texture to the blank background. There was really no "Physical Animation" in this video, the only time that the character moves from Frame by frame was his facial animations. Do try to fix some of these things and I believe your series could have a future.
Thank you for you critique, I actually do have a decent microphone, but since this was done during school, I didn't have that around. And yeah I've been wanting to rework my characters for a while, not like entirely, but just their clothing.
And I will eventually make more real cartoons when my birthday comes up, meaning i can get my drawing tablet soon.
ah another young animator. i started when i was just a kid too. keep animating
I will man, I will.
It wasn't too bad. I don't think it would be good for an animation though considering that the pictures did not move that much and I don't think it really needed audio. Still, not bad.
Thanks.