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Something a little older but just got around to getting some music to it. I realize I might have a few oops spots, but the next work I make will incorporate what I have learned up until now.
Thanks for watching, and all the constructive feedback.
Possible part 2? LMK?!
Special thanks to Newgrounds Member, Cacola for the music!
I loved the sound design used for this movie because the music used is perfectly suitable for the soundtrack of a horror movie.
The drawings were a bit crude for my own personal tastes but we all gotta start somewhere.
I got a sense of danger from the combined visuals and sound.
I noticed that you used a lot of motion tweens and shape tweens.
Try mixing in a little bit more frame by frame animation in future movies as well.
You show a lot of potential so far.
Make more movies and upload.
Ignore cerealcreeper. He's clearly never heard of ambient music before.
not bad,but the music is horrible
The music matched great, better then I thought it would! this turned out awesome!
Music was nice, and story line was interesting. I would strongly suggest looking more into line drawing and focus on learning to draw better lines - the thick lined art style makes the whole thing feel childish. Are you drawing with a mouse? That can be REALLY difficult, and if so I would suggest looking into a tablet that has touch sensitivity. I know telling someone to buy better tools isn't really prime advice, but it'll truly help in the long run! Also, adding some squash and stretch and more animation/life to your character and objects rather than just straight forward movements and occasional rotations will really help bring everything to life. Your work most definitely has potential - it'll just take some hard work and practice to clean everything up.
So yeah - my suggestion would be to spend some time learning to work with thinner/more varied lines and with more "life" in movement (squash, stretch, semi-realistic physics, etc)
A short film about a park bench
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